The Light Tower : Will I ever find a succor for my Soul?

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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My heart grows weary from this unending journey

My boat weakened and my paddle lost from the last storm I managed to survive

I'm sailing longer than I prepared for

I didn't plan to be here this long

The faces I'm familiar with are all gone

The ones we started together ended their course a long time ago

The whispers of the sea haunt me in my dreams

The shadows of the night trails behind me

The cold out here is beyond me

Will I ever make it to the light tower?

I can barely see its light from afar

I dream of it every minute

When will I get to the place of refuge

A place to comfort my misery

A place where strength will be restored and I will be refreshed

I'm still in the middle of the sea...

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Good peom writer, keep it up.

Time like this we need not just any word but impactful one. Great job boss

Thank you my ever consistent @royalheir, I'm grateful

We all long for such a place and since you are still in the middle of the sea, you can be sure you will get there soon. Enjoy speed. Lovely one brother.

Beautiful post...

Wonderful poem you have here, whenever I come across a great and well written poem I always wish I also have the talent in me to write a good poem. I don't know if you can put me through in writing a poem.

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