If it's time to go will you set me free
Give me that much awaited liberty?
Or will you hold me back
Pull me off of my track?
If it is goodbye will you let go?
Afraid not, if I let you know.
Miss you. I know that I will
I am certain that is how you'll also feel.
The warmth that surrounds you cloak me when cold.
Honestly, I wish it stays until we are old!
If I go will you follow me?
Live a life of uncertainties?
Fly or swim.
Glide or stride.
Walk or run.
Left or right.
If I go we'll both move on.
It may be a hell of a ride, but go on.
Stay afloat we must.
We will see each other soon with own stories we have amassed.
Goodbye.
It is not forever.
Just "see you around".
If it's time to go will you set me free
Give me that much awaited liberty?
Or will you hold me back
Pull me off of my track?
If it is goodbye will you let go?
Afraid not, if I let you know.
Miss you. I know that I will
I am certain that is how you'll also feel.
The warmth that surrounds you cloak me when cold.
Honestly, I wish it stays until we are old!
If I go will you follow me?
Live a life of uncertainties?
Fly or swim.
Glide or stride.
Walk or run.
Left or right.
If I go we'll both move on.
It may be a hell of a ride, but go on.
Stay afloat we must.
We will see each other soon with own stories we have amassed.
Goodbye.
It is not forever.
Just "see you around".
nice article @arrliinn resteemed yiur blog, hope it can get more upvotes... Nice work!
thank you so much @hiroyamagishi... appreciated a lot...
Nice and great article @arrliinn
Thank you @crisgojar
This is great. It depicts clearly how sometimes, it is important to be away, to be divided for sometime to meet together again. That's what we do whenever we take a new birth, getting separated from our soul-mates and meeting them again, realising the power of true love. Amazing. I also look at things in quite a different manner. I recently wrote about the illusions that humans are trapped into about their reality. You with such a poetic and matured mind would surely like it. Its titled as WHO ARE YOU. I would be glad if you leave your feedback as well. Keep up your good work. :)
Thank you @himshweta....this is a fact of life that we just have to deal with... acceptance is key.
I will definitely have a look at your work.
i love your poetry! please check out my page @mmcint. I upvoted, also, question: how do you center your text? thanks!
Hi @mmcint, thanks for appreciating. Your poetry is very good as well.
On your question - https://steemit.com/blog/@erangvee/htmls-on-steemit
Thank you!
I thought the line about "let me go and follow me" was a good line for a steemit poem since you obviously want people to "follow you". Keep up the great poem writing!
Thank you @jamie-smith. Lemme think about that "let me go and follow me" steemit version. :D
Can't help but sing it to the rhythm of Let Her Go when I read this!
Now, I am also singing! Thanks for this @alexander.alexis!
Real great the sister and smart! @erangvee and @arrliinn... Good luck to both of you...
Thank you habibi @kennyroy. ;-)
I'm dying😢 upvoted!
Awwwwieee.... no, don't! :D
Thanks for the upvote!
Your welcome😁
Wow. Talk about a touching material. Goosebumps. Kudos @arlinn
Thank you @iamfranklinn
Really great post and I understand u liked it cause the pics are amazing😊 @arrliinn
Thank you @trangu
This is an awesome poem, resteemed!
Ohh, thanks for appreciating! It's my first time to write a poem in many years!
Wow! It just so happens that I am feeling these emotions and thinking these thoughts at the moment. You worded my thoughts in a beautiful way.
thank you @minnaloushe! separation happens always happens in many different ways. I just feel that I need to write it down today...
Very nice! I am new... Could you tell me how I should share my poetry with the community? I just posted my first original poem: https://steemit.com/poetry/@time2win/tones-of-black-and-blue
Thank you!
Hi @time2win! Thank you for appreciating my poem. It is my first in many years! You may want to join steemit chat and share your contents there for others to see.
Hello @Arrliinn! Thank you very much for the advice!
You are welcome. see you around.
Hey @time2win, don't forget to write your nice #introduceyourself post. 😉
Simply amazing!
Aww, thank you @dududagrav
This is such a great poem @arrliinn!! It's accessible and honest and actually makes me feel something. You're a wonderful poet- can't wait for more!
Thank you @jaymorebeet! I woke up this morning and started writing that... I myself can't believe that I can still write a poem. I think last I did was way back my teens. It's refreshing- steemit is bringing about what's been buried inside me for a long time ie drawing and poetry. We'll see how far this goes. Lol.
Lovely. I truly enjoyed!
Thank you @tinajordan! I am glad you did 😊
A poem to warm the soul. Great read!
Thank you @rest100...
great post
Nice poem thanks for sharing
lovely write up, we should do something together sometime, check out my page @klynic.
Thanks @klynic! Will do
Golden thoughts ... touching poem:)
thanks for appreciating... :)
Love it! Very relatable
Thank you @indiaoakes.... that's how I intended it to be... everyone for one reason or another needs to say goodbye... :(
thank you @indiaoakes... that's how I intended it to be...
Congrats!
thanks @deveerei
Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing.
Nice writing. It's bitter sweet. :) :( Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for appreciating.
Best... I like it ...
Thank you.:D
😉👍
God is wonderful, peaceful, what I needed. I was a wanderer but he captured me, tied me down just to set me free.
upvoted
Loved from Pakistan ❤️
thank you...
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Your poem reminds me of the song "Please release me". The Chinese do not say goodbye, instead they say see you again.
yes.. goodbye is not the end. it is the beginning of something new.
I also write poems, do check it out.
Thank you @thaokhanh