I remember that many years ago I went to a recital of this oriental style that cost me to remember his name, Haiku. then a few years passed and not very happy to see how books were put with small paragraphs and were left without any use of blank spaces, I prefer to see it in digital.
I like the strength of Haiku and you have that seasoning to compose these letters, I like how you chose element like water, plants and the moon to recite.
You go
I cry
a river longs for sleep
no doubt this is my favorite has a power and an emotional charge of gigantic dimensions. and that is the best quality of Haiku that with a few words unleash in the mind a lot of thoughts and emotions, something typical in any style of poetry.
They are very well achieved and you notice the painstaking writing and research on this type of art.
in terms of different ways of seeing art and its aesthetics I think it would be pertinent to create a gray hair of discord and that through forums we can discuss many issues in an orderly manner. do you think? or would you like that through this type of link the debates take place. I like your idea very much. I always have discussions with different artists of what they consider art in a very egolotra and individual way, and with fear of criticism they prefer to abandon the conversations. art is very nice and open for example; I always propose a formula to determine the artistic qualities of any work, quality, critique creativity in Spanish would be the formula of the 3 "C" but the English changes to Q - C - C and is simple to any work I submit it to this formula to verify if it has an argument, if there is a criticism, if there is creativity then I can value it as a work of art, of course there are also other things I add and are always debatable. I like that comment you made you are the first person who read that places something similar.
Thank you very much for sharing <3 peace and love.
greetings @zameena-zen
Hi @arrozymangophoto ! Thank you for reading my haiku and for your comment. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. Your formula for determining artistic qualities is very interesting and clever! I think the further we push our ideas and understanding on life and creativity, the further we are able to flourish as an individual and community. Thank you for contributing to the community of knowledge !