I especially liked
Staining
My emptiness
With your colours and scent,
...because it is so real that it is more like a happening than words on a page.
I especially liked
Staining
My emptiness
With your colours and scent,
...because it is so real that it is more like a happening than words on a page.
that last observation sums up the essence of poetry to me - it's not simply a communication of ideas but a re-creation of the experience so the reader can share in it too