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RE: Down Love

in #poetry7 years ago

"Words trapped behind
the wall of my fingertips
Can you just read my mind
words they fail my lips"
@lorilikes loved the way you expressed. You i also found words that were trapped behind my fingertips this is for you.

Oh your beautiful poem
makes my heart open
With the flowing emotions
how will i overcome
The truth is spoken
rather be it stolen
With the mind broken
or is it an omen
And i am lonesome
like a lonely batman
No other words i can find for rhyme
Maybe its time i end my poem.

It was real fun while making my first poem.