Please tell me something
and do not lie.
Is something fading
between you and I?
I've noticed changes
in the recent past
and waited patiently,
hoping it wouldn't last
I give everything
I can give you,
but what's given back
seems long overdue
You say nothing is wrong
and you are just fine,
acting as if
the problem is mine
Something is different,
not like it was before.
I'm doing my best,
trying to restore
The way we showed love
to one another
without crowding you
or trying to smother
I just need to know
if one thing is true.
Do you still love me
as much as you used to?
Poetry is the language, soul speaks in !
Need your kind remarks !
Stay passionate, stay blessed !
I do not speak English well, but I like the meaning of the poem
Thank you so much :)
It's mind-blowing bro @asadullah :)
Thank you so much :)
Not bad, i really like tbe breaks in rhyme scheme! Can i ask a favor of you to do the same and atleast gimme a little feedback on mine? https://steemit.com/writing/@stayyoung/do-you-remember-tale-of-two-betrayals promise im just new, and not a bot. Much love regardless.
Thank you so much, I'll soon check out your work :)
Thank you, hermoso poema. Te felicito