This Lonely Place

in #poetry8 years ago

This cold space without your embrace
sleepless nights awake
wishing you were here with me.

This is a lonely place
this void you create in me.

Awaken me now I suffer while you slumber
this cannot be
are we just spectral bodies visiting
the Dream Plane?

Is this real?
This can't be real.

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Very relatable! The description of the place created in you as a 'void' is very powerful! Well done! :)

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