My love is far on the island
Sweet girl, now for fun alone
The boat flashed, the moon shone
in the neck I kalalungkan ole-ole for the girlfriend
wind helps, the sea is bright, but feels
I did not get to him
In the calm waters, in the breeze
in the endless feeling of going all the way
Doom reigns, saying:
"Get the boat to my lap."
Amboi! I've traveled a long way!
The boat together is fragile
Why Dying call first
Before I could cuddle with my love ?!
My sweet is far on the island,
If I die, he dies on his own.
poetry is great.
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