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RE: Lover's Tale

in #poetry7 years ago

This is a very beautiful poem. You are really talented!!! These lines got me.
'I used to be a playboy but your smile stripped me'
'I used to be chaste but your face seduced me'
' To have your yes, I can wait two eternities'
' To have your yes, I can go pluck the bulb of the sun'

Let me stop typing before I type the whole poem over again. This was a good read.

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Lol.....thanks very much for stopping by
Steem on.