I think those lines are awesome! I like where they're taking it, I'm actually, unbelievably) in a little bit of suspense to see what happens next lol. Thanks for contributing!
I forgot to ask you - would you be willing to please upvote the post when you have a chance, so I can add your lines? :)
Sorry, I thought I already did. Hehe
Done anyway. Maybe I was too focused on devuding what to put next on the poem.😅😅✌
thank you @superstarxtala! Added.