I myself as an audience am grateful for such a time and energy you spent to help her improve the writing, as she seems to have a great creative mind...
even I learnt a lot from your comment...Thanks...
and lol...I have this "ellipsis" problem even in my daily chats and writings...I can't avoid it...
btw... I'm not sure if you see this comment or not...But I'll be delighted if you say even a short opinion about my post too, here's the link:
https://steemit.com/poem/@bitpost/my-semi-poem-and-awaiting-for-your-opinion
its seems a bit vague and ambigues while reading , but , I just wrote it and am satisfied by the feeling it gives me... i need expert opinions of someone like you...thanks