Awesome stuff! Do you ever wonder if poems should come with a cheat sheet letting you know if there is going to be rhyming ahead of time or not? I was thrown a bit on this one thinking it was going one way technically but then going another. Perhaps it is best just letting people figure it out as they go!
Thank you! I like to experiment a little with styles sometimes, let the poem develop naturally outside of technical boundaries. When I reread this one I had to read it through a few times to develop the verbal cadence.