Leave you breathless

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)




I want you to be my princess; my queen
I want to leave you speechless
Make your life seem like a dream

I want you to be my darling; my love
Make you feel like you are flying
Make you thank the Lord above

I want you to be my lady; my girl
Make your heart beat like crazy
Make you feel on top the world

I want to be your sunshine;
Light up the darkest night
I want to leave you breathless
Head dizzy and heart tight

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Cute poem :)

Sangat bagus puisi kamu.

Lovely post

nice!! have a good day..

Awwww...do I have the permission to use your poem @bulleth? I love it. The lines,rhymes and originality of thought is so awesome.

Nice poem , this shows a great love , good poem

this post are enjoying couple of lovers so much, i enjoy this post.

Romantic love poetry it is the way that you show your partner that you care about them. Beautiful poetry @bulleth!

Just like the book of Psalms in the Bible.
“God is within her, she will not fall.” — Psalm 46:5
“She is clothed with strength and dignity, and she laughs without fear of the future.”— Proverbs 31:25

I didn't know there were romantic words in the bible talking about women.To appreciate a woman is like appreciation of Gods creation. If you have found love congratulations.

They're a lot of such poems in the book of King Solomon

Its either someone is in love or this is one of the love poem we do compose on a lonely mood making that dream girl feel special when you meet her. But yap, it got lovely lines
But i would appreciate it you tell us who this post is for😊😊😊...or we calling a love Corp to interogate you..🖒🖒🖒...

Muy bonito mucho éxito.

After reading this, the warm feeling of love rushed through my body. Perfect, that's what this is.

The desires of a lover. Lovely poem

"Head dizzy and heart tight"

Hmm! I love this!

We learn what love really is in the absence of it #brokensoul

Love the part that says
Make your life seem like a dream
Because in dreams there is an extent of perfection and happy endings compared to real life

How sweet!

true love waits 😘