10sbd poetry contest(my first kiss)by steemhive

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Staring deep into her eyes
Shining like the morning light
I can't just help feeling fright
I feel lost, right in her sight

Drawing closer to her
Yet it seems am drawing far
Mesmerized when I saw her
I embraced her warmingly like ah

With wide open eyes, she looked at me
And climbing up, upon me but I wasnt free
Gave me a kiss, which made me feel like a sea
And launched unsettlement in me like I want to pee

Her kiss so sweet, so tender
Her kiss that made me feel like an iron bender
It was my first kiss, so quick and slender
Memories to be remembered, I hope she also can remember....

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