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RE: Erased - Original Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

I love your manipulation of the English language. A few places made me stumble, but I think it was designed that way, like "...to those I liked before you and I were a you and I?"
The art that goes with is awesome too!
Thanks for sharing :D

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LOL - that was one of my favorite lines!
Before you and I were a you and I - good use of repetition.
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