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RE: Rooftops

in #poetry6 years ago

I could literally hear you sing this as I read. It has wonderful flow, and I love the lines:

as I sling these blue words onto paper
and I calm down the thunderous things

Like, turning the thunderous into blue skies with blue words that you either a) Wrote with a blue pen :P or B) Are blue, because darn us artistic types, we've got a lot of blues.

Nice stuff hon!