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RE: The Evolution of Our Heroes (Day 9)

in #poetry7 years ago

As always, I love your way with words. The last stanza is probably my favorite from the whole thing: "Our lives are like a long day; it's easier to fall sleep, if we’ve remained awake." That just has so many levels, and if I didn't have class, I'd go on more about it :P

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Cheers, Caleb. Thanks, for noticing the levels in that last stanza, from the school of life :) Go to class, bud, always good to hear from you & know that you understand. Wishing you a peaceful, creative week ahead.

Thank you @yahialababidi! I'm trying, as hard as it is :o