that there would be a day
maybe not soon, but it would happen
that I would remember your name
And the way that you kissed me
hugged and caressed me
How you found ways to seduce me
And that fragrance I bought you
not for sale anymore
would be as fresh as the first time
you opened that bottle
and just what you wore
when I smelled it on you
I remember you told me
that there would be this night
And I wish I could tell you
I was wrong, you were right.
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Sad real deep. Upvoted and followed
Thank you ;) Yeah, it is kind of sad, while I'm happy as F.. ;) Poems pop up like mushrooms in Fall... ;)
You never forget your first heartbreak . .. awesome poem....
Thank you. First cut is the deepest, as they say ;)
I totally agree, and what doesn't kill us makes us stronger and smarter I say.....
Totally true ;)
This is beautiful! Have you heard of The Writers Block? It's a discord chat dedicated to the craft of writing- there's a poetry workshop if you're interested in getting some feedback on your poetry. I'd love to see you in there!
https://discord.gg/37xjpV
Sounds good, I'll come and take a look there ;)
Very well done! Happy to have found this through the Writers' Block. Thanks for sending him our way, @sunravelme!
Thank you, I'm happy to be there ;)
Loveliest thing I'd read in ages. Beautiful.... Following you now.
Thank you, you are making me blush ;)