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RE: Jilted Town [original poetry]

in #poetry7 years ago

curvy as the waitress
pouring coffee

i wish every read caught me off guard laughing so quick, @geke, and it was this lighthearted laugh you set that caused the shift in tone to be that much more impactful!

Time passes which is so often attributed with changing feelings and belonging and home. It is this frequent use of time as the variable that made your use of your experiences and actions as the variable of change so much more refreshing! It so clearly leads the narrator to look at a place through multiple lenses.

deftly done.

If home is where the heart is, it shows in the words here that it is 100% and truly in your family, and how lucky your kids are to have a home in you and each other.

Thank you so much for the share, Stephanie, insightful and reflective read