Interesting companion piece here, my friend, they almost feel as though they should be read side by side.
It's interesting that you took the approach of addressing the star here after relating the dangers in a more 3rd person sense of the demons.
It certainly gives them both a liturgical, good vs evil balancing feel. And, even though it's unrelated, the latin at the end definitely adds to that. ^_^
Thanks, I'm glad you picked that up! Whereas the previous one was chaotic, this one I decided to make the binary using a rhyme-scheme and symmetry, to contrast the lack thereof in the other one.
definitely showed, mate, loved the balanced feel and glad I read both to get the full picture.