You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Trinity (Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago

linking haiku in such a fashion as to craft a story is a fascinating approach for writing, Moe, and certainly not one that would come natural to me.

cool to see it executed so well that you become hardly aware of the distinction between individual haiku and poem.

Appreciated the title alluding to the three sections, and three existences of the holy trinity in protestant faiths. it's those little pieces that absorb readers deeper into the finer details that really catch me.

Thank you for the share, Moe.