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RE: "As He Demurs" (poem/article) >>> Toxic Masculinity ... or Ideological Hyperbole?

in #poetry6 years ago


Dang, am I ever slow.
And oops, I upvoted a 2-month-old comment.
This is indeed a great post. The lions, the discussions, the civility... I'm happily amazed to find it anywhere these days, and happy it's actually here at Steemit.#theluvbug has been around for 2 months?

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@carolkean,

I am fortunate to have so many brilliant commenters. Indeed, I often think that my comment sections are more interesting than the posts themselves. Personally, I think this kind of interaction is an exemplar of "what Steemit could be:" Intelligent discourse; often humorous exchange; and, no screaming or name-calling even when people disagree.

Everyday, I am genuinely excited to check my comments. There are almost always some gems awaiting. Smart people making smart people, smarter.

Quill

Commenters are the best - especially Smart people making smart people[,] smarter. {Kill the comma please} :) If your posts attract intelligent comments, and no trolls and rabble rousers, you are setting the bar for everyone else. Write on!

@carolkean,

I am a poet. One of the most potent tricks one learns writing poetry is to "control the pause." Pause is as important as words. Punctuation creates pause.

As a result, when I write prose, some of the poetry sneaks in (on purpose). This does, at times, create a conflict with conventional rules of grammar.

Nevertheless, I highly appreciate the grammatical feedback. The challenge is to balance the two: proper grammar with achieving maximum effect. What I strive for is to only make grammatical mistakes that won't be noticed by 99% of the population. Of course ... there's always "the you's" ... but, I have to favor the majority of my audience. Most people don't know, or care, that you're not supposed to finish a sentence with a preposition.

We all have our price. :-)

Quill