Your words crisp like a bowl of cereal in my ear.
"Flapping crows; black wings blanketing the burning sky"
It's very dark, very powerful. I'm very very fund of the first poem. But I like the third one too, very fluid, you can feel the atmosphere, this hour when everything dissolves and we just wait for life to come back.
Thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed the poems. My favorite is the last one though. 😂
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Ahah you never know how the audience will receive it. XD My pleasure :)