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RE: Blame No One (100 Days Poetry Challenge Day 2)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

I truly envy those capable of writing out words of positive thinking. This was by far my favorite stanza. "Curse not the day you first saw the light of day." Because some days we feels more blessed than we do cursed and those days alone are worth taking our first breath. It's hard not to blame the world for our mistakes but quality of life will never change if we can't appreciate what we were given.
Beautiful piece (: I look forward to reading more from you!

Be not angry at mother earth for granting you passage into this world
Lay no accusation on father or mother
Curse not the day you first saw the light of day
And felt the embrace of the universe
For in you lieth the responsibility for your life

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Thank you @charlotteroze for visiting my blog.

Yea, sometimes because of the challenges we face, it takes some level of personal effort to keep our cool. And yea, we are the ultimate persons responsible for our lives.

I hope you're participating in the poetry challenge too. I'll do well to visit your blog too.

Thanks