I really like the quality that the frequent ellipsis provides. I love ellipses, but I don't think I've ever tried to use them in a poem. It makes it seem like there's so much more going on between the words.
Thanks for sharing, Terry! Time most certainly doesn't wait.
Hi, Chris!
I tried to abstract from the quatrains and cross rhymes that I used... always :) I still can not understand what came out of all this... so feedback is more important than ever! Thank.
P.S. Happy New Year to you!
Well I salute you for leaving your comfort zone. If I tried to write poetry without my regular, reliable rhymes, meters, iambs and rhythms it would be the trainwreck of the century. :)
Happy new year to you too! It's gonna be a great Steemin' year!