[chrome.citizen]

The Mess of Love

When the love goes awry
and you've lost my back

Can you find that love
that you're holding back

The days where bright but ever more
I see your face with a bitter scorn

No wish no promise could ever match
the love and peace you had once attached

I wish you didn't hold back
I wish I didn't hold back

When surrender comes and we all let go
the pieces fall gently on the floor

We all stand around and look to see
"Oh what a mess we made indeed"

I hope you enjoyed my poem. Please let me know your thoughts!

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