Feels like waking up in a world of dreams;
Retinal burn from a thousand light beams.
Time slows down the faster my heart races;
Only see yours in this sea of faces.
Backdrop blurs with the fauna and flora-
bowing out in honor of your aura.
The air crackles and glows a lovely hue;
All of existence seems dull next to you.
I take a breath as the world fades away,
lost between tomorrow and yesterday.
When my vision clears, it's easy to see,
this love I feel for you flows endlessly.
This write is an awesome expression of love. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Thanks!!
Thanks for the support bro! Glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, what an image! This poem does things to me. Terrific poetry.
:) Thanks for checking it out.
Really wonderful poetry you sharing for us , thanks my dear.
@clayboyn, I love the imagery, flow, and rhythm of this poem. Great job. I Love it!
:) Thanks Ren.
Wow interesting lyrics amazing poem
Your line "I take a breath as the world fades away, lost between tomorrow and yesterday" is amazing man. Its a simple concept, but can hold so much truth and beauty. Good stuff my man!
Excellent poem @clayboyn.
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I am glad you took my shine
I can't complain because you're mine
Nice one Clay. I like the photo as well it seems fitting.
It's hard to stare at that photo too long for me lol. I'm glad you liked it!
This is really nice @clayboyn
This is fascinating!
Could you give me your fb name? I need to talk to you
I don't use Facebook.