Solemn desert [Day 13]

[corderosiete]

Solemn desert

  Solemn desert

Desert, I see
          like the Cosmos
cries over the shoulder blades
with sores.

            Sunny day
Ocher reflection,
           Dry breeze
Impetus of particles

Shady nights
          Icy wind
Vote of the gods
          For your peace of mind

 Sand tree
           Dried fruit.
Fights,
Persists,
Exists.  

Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit School

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The images are of Pixabay 2

Reading notes: Beginner

Original by @corderosiete

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[Day 13/100]

I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
Day 11 anthem-to-the-sea

Comments

[sheisana]

Está hermoso tu poema amigo. Exitos!

[corderosiete]

Gracias amiga. Saludos.

[marlyncabrera]

Rich sensorial images inspired by the desert, @corderosiete. Good luck!

[corderosiete]

Thanks @maryncabrera. Praying that luck would smile.

[onenecha]

Beauty style of poetry today. Love it.

[corderosiete]

Thanks friend.

[ehisoria]

I love the the structure of your poetry
And like always, very good, keep steeming mate.

[corderosiete]

Thanks friend. and Congratulations for the well-deserved triumph.

[prydefoltz]

So nice and you achieved some great rhythm in this free verse as well:)

[corderosiete]

Your words are music to my ears.

[ayahkasih]

I really like how you imagine about sand movement on the desert. Beautiful.

[corderosiete]

Thanks, yes, pure imagination.

[hopehuggs]

The desert turns out to be a 'cold' place.

Great entry into the 100 Days Poetry Challenge

[corderosiete]

Thank you