~Unrivaled Sweetness~

in #poetry6 years ago

"There is no surprise more magical than the surprise of being loved: It is God's finger on man's shoulder."
- Charles Morgan -


The urge to write poetry is in my blood.

Thanks, @vdux, for mentioning your latest haiku contest.

A new @vdux haiku contest: VDUX Haiku Mosh Pit - 2

This time, a haiku about Candy.

How sweet is that?

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Sweet Heart
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~Unrivaled Sweetness~

by Duncan Cary Palmer

I'm dreaming of you...
Our love was remarkable!
Candy's no equal.



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Candy's no equal!
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Are you sweet on anyone?

Be sure to let them know.


~FIN~


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Thanks for the haiku!!! I responded on the contest post.

You're welcome, and thanks again for the stimulus! ;)

Excellent poetry friend, that encouraged me to write a Hayku on a sweet candy. Receive my appreciation @creatr

elegantly simplistic yet a wonderful and beautiful sentiment. Blessings @creatr.

Thanks, Troy.

I use to have difficulties writing haiku you know, but this one is delicate, I love it so much

Thanks!

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sweet and beautiful moment of life

Thank you.

I still have no idea what haiku is, even though the haikubot detects it sometimes in my words. Am too lazy to google it so I guess I'll just support you guys instead

Just visit @vdux contest page - he gives a good example and simple explanation.

Thanks for visiting.

I have read about the haiku, but I have not tried to write it....the technique is complex but very interesting the mamnera in which the emotions and feelings are expressed. It is very interesting, I will read a little more to be able to write a haiku and share with all of you...thank you, greetings friends

Good luck, and thanks for visiting.

Thanks...

a wee poem - a thing can be perfect despite its dimensions. I console myself with that - Life is made up of tiny, perfect moments; we just don't always see them

Thanks, John, for your very astute observation.

Yes, that is a grand consolation, one that should help us focus on the joy of the moment.

Waoo, what a true way when he describes that love is like the finger of God on the shoulder of man, that it is sweeter to write something short but that it contains a lot.