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RE: Dreams Of Love Steps

in #poetry7 years ago

I love the phrase "Splashing Thoughts into Fogs Secrets" as it conjures a magical abstraction of manifesting newness in the transparent NOW.

This amazing cosmic explosion came to a peak with the phrase "I've Realized the Passage of Time in the Sea of ​​Scorched Hours" and the entire last stanza was like the ignition of a universal torch of amber, violet, and seafoam, emanating its rainbow passage through distant star systems.

I admire how you pack so much into short phrases, always unique, a #soulpoetry word prompt that challenges the reader to expand into new uses of the language. Thank you - @dobartim

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You are my great inspiration, I have a problem with the lack of English, and I want to learn more from you my honest friend @d-pend