This is an excellent poem, heartfelt and gently flowing. It's a wonderful testament to the love you have for your grandfather. I really liked the repetition of words, such as moons, suns, and stars, because it made the effect more dramatic and powerful. I was wondering, did you first write it in Spanish or English? Because it actually seemed to flow very well in both languages, which is impressive. Thanks for sharing and have a great day!
Spanish and thanks for your comment!