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RE: Already Zombies (Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago

Interesting work. I enjoyed this macabre piece. It definitely seems like it could be the lyrics to a dark song. The repetition of the (refrain?chorus?) gave a nice rhythm to the piece overall. Thanks for sharing!

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Glad you enjoyed.
I think it'd be a solid song. Some prog-rock ballad, or nu-metal song. :)