She was the one so pleasant so sweet
She was the one to get me back on my feet
I didn't know i loved her on tell she left me
I thought of suicide but thats not me
I love life and my family
so im just happy to have you as a memory
but i will always remember what you ment to me
i remember everyday we yous too plan our destiny
but now shes gone to for-fill a destiny
and thats not me.
hello steemians this is my first attempt to do poetry from the heart
and i wanna say a thanks to
for the advice and i wanna thank you my friends for the support without you i would be 162 friends less :D
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thanks @cleansingpoetry for the support just upvoted and il be making a new poem shortly hope to hear more from you
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Good
thank you
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I must say this is a lovely piece for a first try. Really nice and from the heart. Keep up the good work and you will develop great skills. It is all 90% practice and only 10% talent...
thank you @angelveselinov no problem its a great group ya i really thought about it could of made it longer but for a start i wanna make a short one and build my way up
Awwwww..... Nice attempt... Get better dear and welcome....
thank you @its-kg i will try my hardest :p
just upvoted and resteemed. hope that u'll do the same in return
thanks
great yes il resteem one of your own post now and upvote it thamk you