SO JUST FEARS

in #poetry6 years ago


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Fear, those that lead me to err.
Fears that cloud my moments
and that they do not let my energy flow,
who resist change with all their strength.

Fears that are true,
of those who can not flee,
that your existence does not depend on you,
of those who never submit to your will.

Other fears only reside in our minds,
Attentive to seize the moment of weakness,
to see the flaws and enhance the doubt,
that which limits us from taking one more step.

Fear is not the right factor to cultivate,
it is not the optimal way to obtain your goals
or a sure way to live,
because fears only limit you and do not push you.

But fear is not the monster,
nor fears the barrier,
they are only the tool with which we build the base
with which we promote our reasons to achieve everything.


This is the english version of my article. For see my article in spanish press here.

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Nicely penned. I like the way you told about the fear, which scares, discourages, weakens our thoughts and willpower in the whole poem. And then in the last stanza, you showed the other side of the fear. I like the way you did it.

And the last stanza I like it a lot. It is beautifully penned, I believe.

I'm waiting for your next work. I hope you'll something beautiful like this again.

I have also written a few posts. So, if you have time then do check my posts. I'll be glad to see you on my blog.

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I translated it and I understood it, exactly I would say that fear can bring positive things if the courage is greater!