Scribbles #9 - Closure

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Closure


As dusk is about to end
I bid goodbye to the purple skies
with the echoes left unsaid

Hello Steemit fretz

Welcome to my Scribble Series. This is my nonsensical and random write-ups that I’ve recently written or hidden all these years. They are bits and pieces of my ♥ that I’m sharing to all of you.

This haiku was inspired by @eaglespirit for @dbooster's Haiku Contest Number 3. You can find it here.

I've never tried Haiku and learned about it here on Steemit!

One of the best things, when I go home to my grandma's are the sunsets. Just across the street is where my Aunt lives. She has a Nipa house right beside the sea, you look right out the window and you get to witness this stunning beauty.

Would love to know what you think.

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Very nice picture 😊

Thank you. :)

Wait, did you take it? :O It's awesome.

Yes, I did! ♥

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Beautiful! ... both, the view and the scribble :-)

Thanks @shantan ! Glad you like it. ^^

That's a really beautiful Haiku!
Thank you for sharing :)

You're welcome and thanks for dropping by.

wow!! maau na kaayu ka yot ganahan kos 3rd line 😍 og kay wala nay pink hahah 😄

Tenchu yoyot sa tabang. Labshooo.

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Beautiful image of an almost blood red skyline and together with ES haiku which is hard!

It's mentally challenging mave. Huhu Pero aja lang talaga. ^^

Your poem and photograph match perfectly. Such a beautiful photo! I love sunsets 👌

not only does the picture and poem match, but the colors give it more depth and meaning. I think its great!

Thanks foxy and am glad you like it. ^^

Such beautiful writing. Always love haiku m, a whole load of emotions in simple words. Keep it up! ☺️

Thank you @kymio this means a lot. :)

I love the haiku -short yet effective :)

Thank you Jeremy. ^^

Reminds me of getting ready for the evening with a glass of red wine, after seeing the image. (-:

Beautiful photograph! That you could say so much in just three lines proves that you are good at it.

Thank you @maxabit this is my first time in officially making a haiku so this means a lot to me. :)

I absolutely love your beautiful poem, Dawn. And OMG that gorgeous scenery and sunset looks like paradise. You're so lucky to be able to visit there.

Anj xx

♥♥ Thank you Anj! This means tons and tons to me. Yes, I can't wait to finally go home.

You're welcome, Dawn xxx

:) I love your haiku. It leaves a lot of thoughts in my head, like what were those words that were left unsaid, and the beauty of the image of "unspoken echoes". I also love the aesthetic surrounding it.

It's an awesome delivery, like a love letter, like it's a complete thing regardless of it being 3 tiny lines.

Thank you for doing something so pretty. :)

Thank you Sharon! ♥ Coming from you, this meant a lot! You're one of my favorite writers. ♥

I'm happy you like it. :)