I tend to think 17 syllables is far too long, much longer than it is in Japanese. But having said that, these are all nice. Good job!
reading
your poems
I smile
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I tend to think 17 syllables is far too long, much longer than it is in Japanese. But having said that, these are all nice. Good job!
reading
your poems
I smile
Thank you. I feel genuinely happy when I share my writings. More so, when people relate and feel something out of it. That's a great haiku too! :)