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RE: In The Eyes Of Your Luck

in #poetry7 years ago

Wow! This is lovely. Your poetic prowess never cease to amaze me... The lines are powerful and practical that one's heart can feel their essence.

Particularly, I love this line:

I'm going into new goals with surprise, The newspapers are writing about you a lot of lies because I know you kissed me behind the scene of famous characters.

Permit me, sir to rephrase the last part of the expression above:

"The newspapers (including people) are writing or saying about STEEMIT a lot of lies because I know STEEMIT kissed me behind the scene of famous characters."

Thanks @dobartim for sharing this awesome piece of poetry.

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Thank you very much for nice words