You're moving quietly between the ranks of giant words. I dreamed of your sighs in the embrace of strange plants while we were passing on the other side of the memory. The sun showed the hideous side of the night through the liquid mirror of our peace.
Together we grow through a thousand new dimensions of knowledge, love awaits us at every step of the romantic kisses. You are special silk in my hands, be gentle in the touch of magical lips, we build a relationship on the wings of passion - wake consciousness in me.
The vision brings new visions into the storm of your kisses somewhere in the vortex near the waterfall. Your decision brings more new issues into the passion of an impossible love. The heart was crying in the depths of desire, be proud - I loved you honestly.
Raise the strength of a hundred enthusiasm, be a lion with a smile of stars, we conquer new happiness in a love adventure. Be my way, my strength in a happy ecstasy without end, leads me gently through the beautiful moments of emotion and love.
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You are special silk in my hands, be gentle in the touch of magical lips, we build a relationship on the wings of passion - wake consciousness in me. Deep words to propel my mind for a great movement in my life, I hope you understand. Thank you for this wonderful piece. More grease to thine elbow friend.
We win together
from some poetry you post in your account I noted there are words that become a point of your footsteps in making your writing and your inspiration to work.
those words are, love, desire, magic, lips and kiss, and there are other supporting words that you often explore in each of your poetry writing.
some supporting photos are also able to depict visually and in accordance with the character of the poetry.
maybe someday I'll be able to guess that it's your work without you mention who the author is, and can be made Contes guess your work.
I will try to follow and continue to wait for every poetry of your work.
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A beautiful poem, my friend and romance promotes the truth of love! Thank you @dobartim
Thank you very much
Slow and steady we march on
Marching towards our dream
In a vision study clear as crystal
Our enthusiasm is high
So high that we could climb peaks
Mountain Everest is a stepping stone
You’re the light onto my dark path
You’re my star
Amongst all , I chose you
Wonderfully made
Carefully made
You’re an epitome of beauty
I’m proudly in love with you
Cause the pride of your beauty has got me intoxicated
Bless you my morning star
Very potic
"love awaits us at every step of the romantic kisses. You are special silk in my hands, be gentle in the touch of magical lips" My favourite lines.
Nice
weldone post I like it.
Thanks
Beautiful words that pierces the heart and touches the soul.....
Lovely
its a nice poem sir. i could feel the emotions behind it.
am seriously in need of your support sir, its gonna be 9 years this week that i lost my dad, it was an accident (i wrote about the whole incident and posted it yesterday .you can reach it through this link https://steemit.com/promomentors-challenge/@hurlamideh/my-promo-mentor-writing-challenge-the-death-of-my-hero)
so in honor of him, i decided to create a contest (its about celebrating our fathers before they die and after they die, i dont want others to make the same mistake i made, because i didnt get to celebrate him while he was still alive not until he died. so i created this contest for my fellow stemians to win 5sbd just writing poem to celebrate there dad(alive and dead), and i get to chose the best among them.
so am asking for is your support in this contest sir, even if its just your upvote or a donation sir (no amount is too small). i just want to make my papa proud, if at all he is watching me from above.
this is the link to my contest:-
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it is actually not a spam..it was a request. ..and its ok if you say no..but calling it a spam doesn't is wrong sir. thanks for your response anyways
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Wow this is a nice poetry. I must say that I love bit of it.
Together we grow through a thousand new dimensions. I just love that part.
Thanks much for sharing sir.. You made my day
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Wow, now I know why you even teach poetry, and it's simple, you are good
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Very nice picture ... Thanks for posting beautiful pictures
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poetry is very memorable and full of meaning, eager to follow every post you @dobartim
Thank you very much
What a very nice poem sir thank you for Sharing with us
Thank you
Very good poem, may be a lesson for us all in life @dobartim
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Someday I hope, I can get inspiration like your imagination. Awesome poetry! You're really give me spirit to writing poetry.
Go ahead
Bravo @dobartim! I love your writing style, very fluent, and the way you connecting the romance, the encounters in another dimension and consciousness.. keep it going!
Thank you very much
Nice poem and good choice for accompanying pictures!
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What a wonderful poem.
You have always lovely and pure heartfully words
Thanks for this
I will resteem this post because of its beauty
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Beautiful piece...very moving.i studied poetry in college but never pursued it after, i left rather went into business. this takes me back and make me begin to wonder if i shouldn't go back to my first love?
Hey u have just join steemit and I read your poetry..It's a Avery awakening poetry bro..hope you keep in touch
"The heart was crying in the depths of desire, be proud - I loved you honestly."
Loved that line you got there @dobartim. And yes, i did with all honesty. 😊
Man! This is a therapeutic poem from the essence of Nature. Good work.
Excellent poetry friend. Greeting
such a amazing poetry