The stars circle around our desires, you are an inspiration to the new generations that fly on the wings of lust. We walk, we run in the clouds of future changes with thoughts larger than atoms - Music inspires your movements in the foggy consciousness of harmony.
I feel the heat of the sand clock, the time passes in the best days of passion. We give maximum attention to the wrong people at the right time, each error has its pedestal on the knowledge table - We turn new ideas into volcano forums, where mysticism and the power of ordinary people disappeared.
We change habits in waterways, I look at your feet and your mouth, my eyes burning with fire in tunnels of light beauty.
Desire is the primary discipline of disappearing in the sea of ignorance, we raise spiritual values in material forms of perfect transience.The exit shows magic signs in the waves of your eye. We rejoice in our relationship through the smiles of childhood, beautiful manners cling our reputation to the extremes of eternal love. We are experiencing the future now, the passion causes love to the winner's field.
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i love such poetry
the humans have to know about REAL LOVE!!!
go on like this.
great words
Thanks for nice words my beautiful German lady
Experiencing love from your perspective feels so beautiful, your poem makes me want to fall in love all over again. Thanks for sharing this
See you on the top
Yet another captivating piece about love my friend. Love seems to be your driving force and passion giver.
The way you write about each day from new angles remains unique and enchanting
Make one poetry, It is time
I made one yesterday, not about love though.
About goodbyes when a child grows.
History is magistre vitae
@dobartim, please i hope i do not look out of line.
How does it take you to craft something as wonderful as this? How long did this particular piece took you?
Interestingly made clip
Thanks
It's so good.Dude
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This poem is Unparalle unique @dobartim.
Obviously #steemitschool we shall win together
We win together
THE RIGHT PERSON THE WRONG TIME THE RIGHT SCRIPT THE WRONG LINE THE RIGHT POEM THE WRONG RYME AND A PIECE OF U THAT WAS NEVER MINE
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Interesting art, the peom too.
Thanks
So poetry, sounds like the modern book of proverb. keep it up cos its so inspiring. am sure life's are affected by this.
Love is everything
I love how you construct your words on your poem. It's wonderful. Continue posting poems like this 💜 have a nice day ahead.
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Wow very beautiful golden gif sun, I like
Thank you
You are welcome, I hope friends also want to see my post
I get a lot of inspiration from these poetry. Though I’m a little bit inexperienced and I hope to learn more about love. I see love is a really beautiful thing.
Keep going
And sometimes neglect those who deserve it ignorantly, but at the end justice will prevail and those who worth it will avail
Keep going
Thanks for the encouragement
This poem is Unparalle unique
That is a collaborating effort once again from Dr. Great Success ....... I must say the theme in this piece with the language used are of tense language ........ The imagery with the poem are of good creativity. All the same theme of love still counts here as you are been endowed with much love as seen in your disposition.
Love is pain they say but say love is a priceless feelings that you can't quantify at all. I always get inspired each time I read your poet.
Loved every bit of it
Wow, you got a nice poetry right there amigo.
I love your poems.... The get me in tune with the expression of your emotions.
The exit shows magic signs in the waves of your eye. We rejoice in our relationship through the smiles of childhood, beautiful manners cling our reputation to the extremes of eternal love.
Of the many written words, the words above concerns me greatly. The game's strong words piercing sharp, not everyone is able to understand the meaning of the strife of love in the poetry you wrote this time, the words were so meaningful and very strong, but vague could be interpreted directly if not explored every word . I had to reread your writing three times above, just to understand the smile said a childhood that you describe, and a love that is eternal.
Your writing is challenging enough this time.
Ain't this the truth >
We give maximum attention to the wrong people at the right time
been there done that...
But it also seems an affliction very common amongst us humans. We just need to look a the state of our world politics and health of our planet ...
Excellent post , you are creative and talented dear. I personally dough my cap for you. keep it up
Excellent article with a amazing picture
Your poem is full of inspiration it talk about real love, it's wonderful, please how can i partake in steemit school @dobartim
This post is more than good, I must say it's an excellent post,am in love with the picture @dobartim
Your words are written beautifully.
Please check mine too.
Beguiling poetry and hypnotic images
I'm so happy I followed you on here. I love the unique style you have. Thank you for your writings.
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