We dream big ships with wealth, we go to the path of material happiness. Your body draws the attention of the mind through the magnet of magical passions, emotions touch the stars in the dreams of illusion. Habits create dopamine while time passes in infinite cycles of karma.
Source - pinterest.com/pin/459507968214403130/We are small stars that shine under the rain, your eyes bring fire to the palm of my love. We pass through storms of life, we make decisions for our children in the oasis of sand. Through the desert pass the giants of knowledge, in the golden age of materialism.
We are happy in problems, passing gifts and moments of glory - this is the magic of deception that tests us for passing on to a higher level of spiritual development. We have become strong in our weaknesses - Passion has replaced love in sexual rituals.
Habit counts money instead of kisses and embraces, energy passes through the clouds of foggy thoughts while we sit on a pedestal of ignorance. Love is the eternal ideal of immortal souls that sail on the wings of your power - Love is the most beautiful habit of life.
Source - pinterest.com/pin/267964246558646661/
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
I think this poetry is for your wife. heheh nice work thanks for sharing my friend
Lol 😂
'Love is the most beautiful habit of life."
I think i like that your poetry does not follow the conventional style of writing poetry. Uniqueness is what makes each one of us perfect in our own ways. And you're surely perfect in the poetry you write. Am always looking forward to your next work.
I am totally in love with the last line of your poem and thats what am going to talk about.
Yes! Love is really the most beautiful habit of life, because only with love can subsequent good works be possible. Learn the habit of love and every other thing follows. Thank you for your good work.
Nice , i up voted , re teem and followed
i would to be strong like you.
great poetry, you are definitely my mentor in poetry because I have being inspired by some of your recent works to write some poem myself. If you are less busy. Please try to check some of my poem. Thanks sir
Love truly is the aisle of many things.
the heartbeat of two ignorant souls,
the peace of many inarticulate borders.
we are the truce announced on love.
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Nice , i up voted , re teem and followed
i would to be strong like you.
HI. Welcome to steemit.
"Habits create dopamine while time passes in infinite cycles of karma."
interesting. infinite?
Hi, Welcome to steemit. TY
i hate the passio
Good love poetry!
i really love the pictures,. they are eye catching!!
story of life in your good words
bener once you say thank you friends have shared things that i can use your post very good friend i like with your post
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Here goes the giant again @dobartim...
After reading this post i feel like i need the world to see diz..thqnk yo once again role model
Thanks
You are always welcome sir
And for this reason i will resteem and upvote
Hi I am new in steemit. Happy to know u :)
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Wow, love love love, we can't do without you, when you find love nothing breaks you down
Congratulation for the lap top
Wow, i can't believe it, wow, am so excited right now, i just check in now after some rough network issue, am so so happy sir. God bless you sir. You will continue to soar higher. Your good mission for humanity and your life would receive great attention, thanks so much. @dobartim you re the best. Thanks for touching my life, thanks for giving me a new hope, thank you, thank you.
What's the next step sir, what do i need to do?
"habit counts money instead of kisses"...Lovely so lovely
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Even the Andromeda galaxy-5th dimension version of Lucid Gal felt the power of your words. Beautiful poetry :)
In the modern world, great importance is given to material values and wealth!
Awesome, upvoted follow and resteem
Hello I am new here and I recently started writing and I think this is a brilliant. You can read some of my stuff at @osasuj.
This is a great post. Habit determines what u do everyday and the kind of people you meet. A good habits draws loyalty, trust, discipline and commitment.
Great work. Check out some of my stuff https://steemit.com/poetry/@mattzoidhead/once-again-original-poetry
Excelente post, soy nueva de esta gran comunidad espero contar con tu apoyo...