Changing Feelings

in #poetry6 years ago
  • Money is a motive for success and deception; we build career happiness on the stone of illusion that disappears into the sand of illusion. I'm looking at teachers without pupils, peoples without passion and scientists without knowledge, our honour is the highest value of a sincere leader.

  • The rhythm of creation opens up new fields for mystical issues, we pass through the challenges and obstacles with the smile of the knight. We build friendships in dollars, where true indicators of pure love have disappeared. A new dimension of happiness begins with the heart, and move your spirit to a higher level of vibration.

  • I saw your game on magical shores of palm trees, you laugh like a child, you are talking with the enthusiasm of love adventure. The creative energy discipline determines the pinnacle of a successful life, the character is the guiding star on the path of light and happiness.

  • Your gentle gaze lifted me to the throne of passion and love, you touched my dreams like a fairy princess. The vibration of thought raises the level of consciousness on the deep paths of moral emotions, I discovered a new world in your kisses of knowledge.


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I'm always intrigued by the graphical pictures you use @dobartim. Who ever does this designs is freaking good.

Thank you

Beautiful Feeling!!
The rhyme scheme is magnificent. The word choice, brilliant. Love the unexpected twist at the end.

We win together

you are awesome :)

Wonderful poem @dobartim. We live in this world of money and must beat money at its own game. We must always keep our heart's and mind's focus on what is truly important and remember that money is an illusion or else the illusion may consume us

I wish you will touch your dream. Please Votes my post & best of luck

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Every line of poetry is heart touching and pics that are added in poetry amazing. Good work mr @dobartim

I am glad you like it

在梦中生,在梦中行。
没有饥饿,没有困苦。
愿在梦中不要醒!

Born in a dream, walk in a dream.
No hunger, no hardship.
Pray not to wake up in your dreams!

see you on the top

But the strike pose.
Money

As destructive as it may feel
It is by far one of man's greatest assets .

Lovely poetry sir @dobartim

Thank you

Money has overtaken everything, to say it in short

Keep going

Money....a never ending topic

Fine poetry and very subtly written about the change of feelings! Thank you @dobartim

You are welcome