Do You Feel The Sound Of My Heart

in #poetry7 years ago
  • Everyone has the right to try new tricks, everything is transient behind the weather wall. Daily tasks become life challenges, we solve the mystery on the bench changes. We raise impossible bridges above the passers-by, we believe in idols of free rich people.

  • The fire has fallen in the long in your eyes, descending from the mountain antennas through the mystical tunnels of light. The help mission has its limits in lemon juice, you are part of a business process that goes from warlike legs. Look at the angels to have fun over our destiny, look at the new future.

  • We recognize goals in our friends, sharks flying on the waves of invisible wisdom. We tie hands to our thoughts, ideals become utopias of brain waves in the shadow of dopamine. Do you feel the sound of my heart, that is the ambition that lives in me.

  • The oasis of our connections connects the thunders of our passion, beauty is needed as a cover for our wisdom. We make money above the coast of ideas, you are a beauty in the hands of a beast that knows the universal laws of the universe.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Congratulations 🍾 dobartim for your leadership and consistency in steemit platform... you have impacted lives positively... Keep doing what you doing sir. Once more congratulations on your reputation getting to 70....

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Wow
The first line caught y eye.. "Everyone has a right to try out new tricks "
With this... It inspires one to start a journey... If you never try.. You can never start anything or even influence people .
This is the way to venture a life
Nice inspirational poem

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Do you feel the sound of my heart, that is the ambition that lives in me.

wow so great poetry

Thank you very much

Woooow! This is profound and looks really poetic, weldone @dobartim

Thank you

Like an angel woooow. Nice post.

Wow make a better comment

My favorite line is

The oasis of our connections connects the thunders of our passion, beauty is needed as a cover for our wisdom. We make money above the coast of ideas, you are a beauty in the hands of a beast that knows the universal laws of the universe.

Great poem there. Thanks for sharing

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nice to see you.your poem so heart touching .All time we learn something from your post...Thank you so much for sharing this post...

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ok..thank..you Dear Sir...

Great poetry, i always learn new idea on how to develop myself in the aspect of poetry writing after reading your poem day after day.

Thank you very much

What a great poem. The photography are really splendid. Your works are always amazing.

Thank you very much, make one poetry

Awesome @you are a beauty in the hands of a beast that knows the universal laws of the universe.

Poetry at its finest @dobartim

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Hello sir I see something changed haha.
You are getting to another level, I see 70 reputation.
Congratulations sir, you deserve it a lot.
You have done whatever it takes.
I really see your hard work and appreciate it, thanks for being there for us to guide us.

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ideals become utopias of brain waves in the shadow of dopamine.

I love how your poems always have a practicality to them. Although you place Beauty in high esteem you recognize that it is a tool to deliver a message. You don't get caught up in the hype. You keep it real. I like that. Great poem. 😎

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