Falling Into Challenges

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We walk in the dark of the sunlight, the rain brings us passion on the wings of the waves. The lighthouse shows the time of our intimate challenges, you woke me up on the island's wizard. Rainbow sang for a long time on the shoulders of the mountains, this moment hides deep thoughts.

  • Conquerors buy tickets for new horse races, we are fog that disappears with morning coffee. We are late for acting because we are ego masters, you have replaced the passion for the eyes of love messages. Cover me with your kisses through the tender words of spiritual touch.

  • You are a sex experiment in the hands of an artist, we make your body from the snow. On a fiery base, you draw the warriors' memories, embrace enthusiasm, and swim in my passion. The river of music crosses the bridge of silence, walk through the sources of our happiness.

  • Your eyes pass through me, your movements provoke the questions of the new dynasty of the rulers. The volcano is burning in the hearts of the lions, you are a tiger who sees the sacrifice of our love. Stay with me in the cold nights, burn me with your strength and gentleness.




Image Sources : pinterest.com/pin/810366526673558692/Original poetry written by @dobartim Be part of our Steem Schools Click on https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

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lovely poetry indeed ... but the pictures awesome...I even called my husband to see them 😁

Greetings from Macedonia

We walk in the dark of the sunlight, the rain brings us passion on the wings of the waves.

This for me says what your piece is all about. Whatever is out there, will be out there. Challenges in life and love won't make an existence complete. Let's make the best of both. Another one you got 😊

Awesome comment, see you on the top

Thank you 😊

Beautiful piece....The river of music crosses the bridge of silence, walk through the sources of our happiness. That line is technical Wow. Word man

Thank you very much, make connection nd enjoy

very good sayings ...the good post, I have learned a lot of things from this.and you selected the good images keep it up

Thank you very much

you are very welcome

Deep thought 👌

Thank you very much

Lovely poetry, I like it
Thanks for sharing soulpoetry
I appreciate your post.......

See you on the Steem Schools

really its a nice post.the photos are awesome.awesome poetry.keep it up.good job

Thanks for stopping

It's good. There are many good words in this post. These are really good. Truly many extraordinary ones

Thank you very much

Nice poem. I will continue to learn from your skill and wealth of knowledge. Keep on ditching out great poem!!!

Welcome to Steemit, be part Of Steem Schools discord channel https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

Hello old friend we did not meet how you are doing, sorry if this is just greeting you again.

Have a nice and successful day

¡Hola amigo y poeta @dobartim!, lindo poema tienes una musa poderosa, estas bendecido con ese don, Dios te bendiga, cariños y besos.

Hola, see you on the class

Beautiful piece....The river of music crosses the bridge of silence, walk through the sources of our happiness. Wow. Word man


JoyLove the poetry. Put me in a relaxed mood. Love the pic color contrast. Great work @dobartim

Thank you very much

Say, how do you make those pictures? I have never seen anything like them. Aside the fact that your poems are quite deep, your pictures attracts me too much. Thank you for good content.

See sources on the end of poetry.

Once again such a great use of words I think you really have made a great taste in poetry.
I don't believe how could a person like you so busy do so much work. This is really amazing. Looking forward to work like you do.

You become inspiration.
Thanks a lot

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Hi, I liked your post, you have my support from now on :D

You're so creative sir . That was your passion sir posting like this was awesome .I like it (y)

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