Vulcanic emotions sprinkle field flowers, your smiles extinguish the passion in the maze of my soul. I was hurt by strange words while I watched your body's speech, the replacement of the matter with the pedestal logic through the window of the cloud of lies.
Perfectly remembering smooth skin in a starry bed, turn your potential to the spring of new love. In addition to signs passing by birds with the heavenly sound of a cosmic hymn, the modeling in the hands of your happiness looks quite different in your eyes with magical possibilities.
You are my communication with the energy of consciousness, swans swim in the lake with the stars of tenderness. There were many emotions on the ship's deck, the journey changed our feelings with the experience of knowledge - We swim at the hands of your freedom.
Come to my heart, my intentions show an example of good emotions as I look at the depth of your thoughts. This is the moment of truth that we see behind the scenes when we look at the mirror of time - Be my mentor in times of great waves and lack of love.
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Deep words @dobartim. Your poems are always so twisted but still captivating. As always, i will still have to read it a couple of times before i finally understand it and get the real message. Good work.
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Of course @dobartim. You are a really great teacher. I learnt from you
Hi sir @dobartim, you are full of love and inspirations. I admire you for having a lot of thoughts in mind. At this moment, I am really trying to create poem but in busy days like this my mind doesn't work well. But I love reading your poems of love and life. ♡
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What an amazing way to express love. Nothing feels as good as loving and being loved. Your poetry points the softness and tenderness of loving. I constantly get blessed with this wonderful pieces. Thank you for sharing.
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Reading this romantic poetry has brought me to write something on love and romance
I’m completely absorbed in your charm
Captured by your softness
Enthralled by your softness
You my love are as soft as the moon
You radiate beauty and love my lovely queen
My heart beats fast and slow at the same time
As you crawl into my bed
With a body a soft as silk
My soul rejoices whenever you come around
And my manhood tingles as you go into shower
I pray for night to come so we can make it endless making love.
You’re more than a my partner
You’re my second half.
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It is a romantic poem I love reading romantic poems and sometimes I love romantic poetry. I love this poem very nice to me. I would like to thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I hope that you Such beautiful poems will not be shared with us
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This is a very deep and rooted love.
It makes love seem like a beautiful thing...
Even though you're in love with that special person, you need someone who will also walk you through and lead you on. That special person has to be the one who would also lean on you to lead him/her on.
Very wonderful piece Sir.
Thank you young lady
You're welcome Sir
Wow! I had to read it a couple of times to understand i haha! But it is so captivating! Great piece @dobartim!
Thank you very much
This was a poem inspired by a kind heart of love ....... It shows more of your perspective for love Sir ....... It nothing but a triggered heart of a loving person that has done this .....great piece.
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Waoh @dobartim you poet ate always creative and amazing. It has a way of driving meaning into the reader. Keep up sir. You inspire me with your poet to syart having passion for poet
Very nice post.really lovely.
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Waow what a great collection of word .. Your poetry is always good .. you write a amazing and nice poetry .. i like your poetry ....good job
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This poetry makes my brain clearer. Thank you sir.
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I really like poetry
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You are welcome
Artistic mind, you really write good
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Gosh! Another piece! <3
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You make me wish i had taken literature serious @dobartim
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I really enjoyed reading your poem @dobartim.. They are so amazing and lovely!
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The poetry is a good one. Thats good keep it up.
I am glad you liked it
Such strong words i really loved that poem so romantic :)
Thank you very much for this nice words
wow this is very lovely & awesome..thanks for sharing
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Beautiful writings
Such words are pure love :)
Poetry with mixed feelings is the difference between love and lack of love. I liked @dobartim.
❤Love should not be sought, it come at the right moment, and when it comes you can feel it through every pore.❤
It defines our being in harmony.
And when love comes naturally, then it is divine, not human. 💕
Greetings @dobartim