In the Love Pool

in #poetry7 years ago
  • The rain fell through the mystical mirrors, the energy circling with the eyes of your strength. We sit on the bench of the future as we learn from previous memories. A proven truth is looking for a new refuge in your intentions, this day is the beginning of a new waking up of love.

  • Look at the stars that draw your face on the canvas of life, you are the inspiration for the enthusiasm that I drink at the sources of your body. Magic hands let balloons to walk around your smile, the beauty of a princess always shines under the rainbow colors.

  • We are resting on boring tasks, looking for a place that shows us the freedom of the spirit. Motivation has no boundary in the dynamics of impossible accomplishments, we are looking forward to small details that show the way to new illusions.

  • New road signs show the intersection of free thoughts, you are an inexhaustible pool of emotions of passion. We seek love through the kisses of your soul, you are an incredible horizon that gives us new goals. Romantic tenderness offers a new agreement for our success, thank you for sincere love.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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"We sit on the bench of the future as we learn from previous memories. A proven truth is looking for a new refuge in your intentions, this day is the beginning of a new waking up of love"

  • Yea we should always learn from previous memories and everyday should be a waking up of love and to love.
    "Motivation has no boundary in the dynamics of impossible accomplishments, we are looking forward to small details that show the way to new illusions."
  • this line is educating on how important motivation is. And your poetry are pretty complex it urges one to keep calm and read because if hurried/rushed it can't be understood
    Good one

Thank you for this beautiful words

The best poetry i have ever seen. I like the way you use the words. Keep up the good work.
I am always listening to you the class.

We win together

I was thinking when i read out poetry, no doubt is at top level, most important thing is the person behind it who always gathers lovely stuff for steemit family i. e @dobartim.

Let me say that He has gorgeous personality.

Look at the stars that draw your face on the canvas of life, you are the inspiration for the enthusiasm that I drink at the sources of your body.

I fell in love with the lines. Very nice poetry with so deep meaning.
I come here everyday to read your poetry.
Thanks a lot for sharing.
We win together

See you on the top

Lovely poetry, you are so talented. Have a great weekend!

Thank you very much, have a nice and successful day

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It is a poem that describes love colorful, this post will be touched when married couples read it.
Love it.

Thank you

Wow... 😍 😍 😍 Nice poem. 👏👏👏 Awesome write-up. And your photos are so lovely and attractive.

I'd say you're one of the creative minds @ned thought of before he came about this great and lovely platform #Steemit 😂 ☺ 😂 😂 ☺. Quite captivating and useful. 💯💯

Thanks for sharing @dobartim

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This is fantastic, an amazing poetry.
It's imaginary and at the same time it can be felt. Nice work @dobartim

Thank you very much for your nice words, see you on the top

This a very nice poetic article.
you are naturally blessed with this I believe.
i have resteemed it for more people to appreciate it.
God bless and enrich your handwork.
See you at the top @dobartim.

We win together

Hail SteemSchool!!!
Great poetry...
so the Illustration.... :)

I like the pictures too, they go with the words. Do you get inspired by pictures when you write? Or it's a secret? All in all, I like it!

Thank you, see you on the top

very niceee!