Love On The Wire

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We break the winds in quiet nights, the romance shines through our liberated minds - the world has defeated poverty in exodus. We woke up in the knowledge that grows like a yeast of a new bread, we charm a new kind of human greed in the beautiful catalogs of passion.


  • Source - moroccoworldnews.com/2014/01/121161/on-the-eve-of-passion-poem-2/?print=pdf

  • Patience is wrapped in the fine word of our journey along the starry paths, traces remain to future masters to publish a list of past. Logic maintains emotions through wild west films, organic ecstasy sets up new wires of love jugglers - Perfection is shown on the artwork.

  • Life passed through a fairy tale in the skill of losing time, you brought me a handful of unrest - I feel heaven in my soul.
    A tired horizon in the power of your beauty, there is a new romantic morning in the room of wonderful games - Consciousness is the cup of love at the top of your view.

  • The wire is long, short and small years pass through tunnels of search for happiness. We walk through thoughts, emotions provoke new waves of dopamine storms. I found the real diamond of love - he knocks in your magical chest -
    my love.

  • tumblr_oesbanO1Gt1t6rnyho1_500.gif
    Source - tumblr.com/search/we%20love%20gif%20art


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Beautiful poetry, my friend and this delightful comparison of love with a diamond! Thank you @dobartim

I love the expression
I love the reflection
I love the comparison
I love the word usage
I love every bit of this post

You are a great poet
I enjoy reading this.

Love is a beautiful thing.

Much love @funkylove

I lost my words to say soon I finished reading. You know how to pick the actual diction that make your poetry alive. It is so deep, my friend. Thank for cheering my day with yours poem. Keep up with good work.

@dobartim amazing post. your selection of word for this poetry is great keep sharing.

good post friends .. please unvote have me ya friend

Very nice..

Woow good pos you

Very good, as usual. I'm still working on sonnets, limericks and free verse. I have a problem right now of doing more 'telling' than 'showing' in my poems. I'm working on it, but it's coming along slowly.

I can't help it, you are awesome in writing. I wish to be as good as you, you are a true definition of a poet. Poetry is dobartim.
Logic maintains emotions through wild west films, organic ecstasy sets up new wires of love jugglers - Perfection is shown on the artwork. Love this line, I wish I can take some lessons from you. You are great, happy new year in advance, we are just few hours away

wow its very nice

Woow suitable pos you

Odlično, bravo! :)

You are a romantic at heart. Happy New Year, @dobartim!

beautiful poetry and so sweet words, lovely expressions.