On The Lips Of Art

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)
  • Every arrow hits the heart of the opponent, show me the weakness in an open passion. We move the stars while we play at the Olympic Games, watching the snow in the sunny nights under your feet. Movements attract attention, the desire grows to the height of your waist.

  • We drink on wild feasts, we give the strength to our eyes to make new smiles on the entertainment ground. We dance with wolves in the valley of happiness, the sea is quiet on your beautiful breasts. New flags show the abundance of the mind, you disappeared on the waves of need.

  • I follow your words through the universe of silence, you are a cloud that covers my inspiration of the spirit. Magic in forest landscapes, the flowers give us a new kiss energy. The bears walk through the wires of the attempt, wake up in my ignorance.

  • A true artist creates an image with ideas of new consciousness, you are a game in the hands of a master who becomes a reality. We open new pages of life, raise successful waves of volcanic emotions - Create love in the name of victory, create a perfect film of the mind.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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the work of true artists, poems and drawings is very interesting

See you on Steem Schools discord channel https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

yes, I've joined steemit school since yesterday and i hope to learn many things there, thanks sir

We have a class now

Perfect.. I don't know how you are using these words like this and opening a new perspective in our minds..

Thank you for your beautiful words, be part of our Steem Schools project

Beautiful! <3

Thank you very much

Thank you for sharing!

We win together

Wow this is mind blowing..we dance with wolves in the valley of happiness--> deep, when you're happy you're blind to the lurking danger
This is nice

Wise words, see you on the top

Thank you..you always bring it hot everytime

u are d best.jpg
you peoms are always interesting with nice arrangement.

Thank you very much

It is difficult to understand the essence of poetry without knowing the language. But, the content immediately shows wise words. And pictures are just a masterpiece. Good luck to you and Love.

Сложно понять суть поэзии не зная языка. Но, по содержимому сразу видно мудрые слова. А картинки - просто шедевр. Удачи Вам и Любви.

me gusta su poesia

A true artist creates an image with ideas of new consciousness,

I think this is so true ... I have been doing this without thinking too much on it but I am always looking to see things in a new way, to evolve through art:)

Nice work, Dobartim. Very enjoyable and illuminating read:)

"...we give the strength to our eyes to make new smiles on the entertainment ground."

I look into each of your lines and I am blown away by your flows @dobartim

It is like the rays of the sun that sink into my skin during the day.

It is like the gentleness of the moon that hugs in the midnight.

It is like the barking of the dog, yet as quiet as the sound of a butterfly.

Aaaargh, thank you for sharing.

You are really pushing me to perhaps be writing only poetry on steemit.

I am already considering this.

pictures speak a thousand words. and you combine them with the right words. your posts always challenge me. thanks for sharing