Perfection Of Love

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)
  • We pass through the seasons with natural beauty memories, we remain behind the change of consciousness at the mystical level of excuses. Each word leads us to the path of sincere light, in the dark places we find the goals of the sun. A tiny color hides the body of the challenges, the unique strength comes with the emotion of the universe.

  • We cover mistakes of spring snow, we clean the power of the mind with outdated techniques of the metaphor. Your future brings sincerity of love on the palms of past victories, emotions jump from a branch of love adventures while we make new forests.

  • A new idol with a smile of red color, your eyes lift the body's energy to the level of universal rules. Changing thoughts in the body of the lion, we renounce the action that brings the vision of life. Dancing on the podium of the heart with kisses of happy poetry.

  • You woke me up with gentle kisses, turn around to look at the tenderness of your being. The depths of wisdom proudly make a new world at the foot of your feet, we run across a sandy storm as we watch the illusion and the film. We run across a sandy storm as we watch the illusion and the film.


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in the dark places we find the goals of the sun.

That is SOOOOOOO true!!!

Lovely piece @dobartim

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Love is eternal pours your feeling with joy and happiness a special electric wave passe when we saw our beloved and all the things what is now seems beautiful is due to love.
Congratulations sir it's your very heart warming poem.
Best wishes dear sir @dobartim

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The poem is very nice. You always write poetry. Your poems really love. Good luck for you. @dobartim

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Wow 😮 what a poem, I like the figure of speeches been used ! Great job @dobartim

Thank you very much

a most beautiful memory and unbeatable pleasure

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Wow it is very nice to start the day with your multi dimensional poetry..

Thank you very much for your nice words

In those moments when that beautiful sight came be
No solace did it give to the owner of that sea
In those small moments of mediocrity
Did I find a measure of tranquility

For those words to come and possess me again
I will give my heart and let it be slain
Moments of divinity and beauty pass by
All I can do is to stop the time old sly

Awesome words, make one poetry

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Great poetry, keep it up.

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Now, this is truly amazing.. I read it 3 times already and I'm sure to read it more times than I can count. I can't seem to get enough of it, especially

We cover mistakes of spring snow, we clean the power of the mind with outdated techniques of the metaphor.

Runs deep!

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"in the dark places we find the goals of the sun. A tiny color hides the body of the challenges, the unique strength comes with the emotion of the universe."
This paragraph is quite captivating and true, i like every bit of it and there is strength behind emotions and love is the greatest power one could have
Nice piece