Song From The Side

[dobartim]

• We walk through the wires of the past while the storms bring new words of magic races. Your eyes have set fire to the sea with a utopia of sweet speech, raise the cup of liberty through the wedding feasts of smoke - The guitar covers the background of your beauty in gymnastic dancing.

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  Source - pinterest.com/pin/446841594253052048/

• We bend the light around the mountains as we torture thoughts from the mirrors of the truth. We are looking at the flowers of new roses, keeping the pace of romantic meetings through the sexual irritations of all senses - Memories are lifted to the level of life through the stimulus of enthusiasm.

• We grow in concrete forests when we use virtual fruits, we play digital food through a virtual ecstasy. Your movement brings old dynamics to the music that comes with the magic side of your beauty - Kisses fly in the clouds of our habits to become one body in the chemistry of nature.

• Your lips cover my body with snowy touches, a fire has awakened a volcano in the depths of my heart. I need your gentleness, your love perfectly brings new sounds of music that comes from some more beautiful side of the world -
  You're my most beautiful dream.

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  Source - pinterest.com/pin/510103095264161203/

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Comments

[pouchon]

I thank you for sharing these great words putting together.
It proves steemians have good taste and you always deliver the right key note.
Keep on steemin'

[dobartim]

Thank you for support

[mumin007]

These words are simply awesome, got stuck into my heart, all of them are fabulous but I loved to read this one more,
Your lips cover my body with snowy touches, a fire has awakened a volcano in the depths of my heart. I need your gentleness, your love perfectly brings new sounds of music that comes from some more beautiful side of the world -
You're my most beautiful dream..
Its how the one you love cools the volcano inside you, brings you peace

[dobartim]

Excellent comment

[mumin007]

Thank you

[nabilah]

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[dobartim]

Welcome to Steemit

[anamaria20]

excellent!

[dobartim]

Thanks

[farah-kamran]

beautiful words nice poetry i really like it thanks for sharing

[genetics.life]

nice song vote me sir

[dobartim]

Welcome to Steemit

[vicky787]

Superb collection!

[dobartim]

Yeah

[aderemi01]

Great post

[dobartim]

Thanks

[sylvesterkelechi]

The last verse(first line) is ecstatic: "Your lips cover my body with snowy touches"

[dobartim]

Make one poetry

[sylvesterkelechi]

I am sorry, I can't Make any poetry.
I like poetry well written like yours but the composition of poem lines to make up the poetry is what I am not in line with.

[cutmutiakasih]

Menakjutkan

[dobartim]

Hvala

[cutmutiakasih]

Saya tidak megerti baha itu

[samueloption]

Aesthetics is the quintessence of poetry and you have so portrayed it in your work.
The imagery and diction is terrific.Hello @dobartim.

"Song From The Side", is a MUST read poem.
Keep doing the good work!

[dobartim]

Thank you very much

[samueloption]

You are most welcome.

[mistakili]

I love your poetic constructs, its so imaginative

[dobartim]

Thank you very much

[cyprianj]

This is a beautiful write up,
Never disappoint with your beautiful write up.... Good morning

[dobartim]

Good morning

[mercurybot]

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[luckyvotes]

You got a 43.51% upvote from @luckyvotes courtesy of @dobartim!

[appreciator]

This post has received gratitude of 1.64 % from @appreciator thanks to: @dobartim.

[peterecheng]

Always expecting the touch of great words, i can but say its a real cracker on me and i love hearing words like this. Thank you very much

[dobartim]

Thank you for nice words

[boomerang]

This post has received a 3.78 % upvote from @boomerang thanks to: @dobartim

[yungchief]

Well constructed and use of word is perfect. Great poetry

[itharagaian]

I just love Jim Warren's Art, I got a big puzzle with one of his paintings ...

[momzillanc]

“The guitar covers the background of your beauty in gymnastic dancing.”

“We bend the light around the mountains as we torture thoughts from the mirrors of the truth.”

Wonderful and unique turns of phrase.

[marzukirizki]

good photo I'm interested to see it is really amazing, thank you for sharing ...... @marzukirizki

[macdonaldfebi]

Kisses fly in the clouds of our habits to become one body in the chemistry of nature.
Am so enthuse by the caption above. The words and tones of the poetry is awesome
Especially this stanza
Your lips cover my body with snowy touches, a fire has awakened a volcano in the depths of my heart. I need your gentleness, your love perfectly brings new sounds of music that comes from some more beautiful side of the world .
Thanks @dobartim

[pjunlimited]

I am good in poetry, but what keeps drawing me to your post is your graphical artwork you use in your posts.