Sunny Road

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We leave traces in the future days of our happiness, we look forward to the first signs of the sun in the spring night - we open the windows of our visions with dreams. The areas of the beginning see the horizons of love - new flowers grow in the air of freedom.

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  • Poetry is planting new moments of emotional romance, the soul becomes a butterfly on the ship of ecstasy. On the wings of dust comes the turmoil of our erogenous zones, the mind is a wild worker of illusion. The umbrella releases the power of wild strawberries through the smile of your specialties.

  • The beach is windy through the waves of surfing beauty, your hair flying in the clouds of our love. We require embryonic changes in the touch of passionate manners, we change dollars and dollars for sense enjoyment - The beauty is obsessed with my desires.

  • Pure days in the blue color of your eyes, reflection brings peace in the spiritual progress of deep meditation. You are the top of my expectations, fate brings a hit of the heart in the field of the eternal lake. You are the sun, the path that leads me to the ultimate goal of personal change.

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Good insights. Desire to change within. Good positive reinforcement. That is what i see in tjis poem

This is an awesome piece of art work. The words are really deep and conc. The pics and work you used is breathtaking and amazing

Can I ask you a question? Where do you get your inspiration to write your poem from. You post at least 4 per day. You are a great poet. This is awesome.
You are the top of my expectations, fate brings a hit of the heart in the field of the eternal lake. You are the sun, the path that leads me to the ultimate goal of personal change. I love this

👏👏👏

Poetry is the needle that knits words to life .nicely knitted words @dobartim

Not a poetry fan, but hope my tiny upvote can just provide a little support to your fabulous competitions.
Kindest regards

Hi dobartium.. A true poet.. Thanx for sharing a sea of emotions i am feeling in it

Your poems are awesome! The last gif kinda creeped me out.

Very good poetry, I love to read your poetry @daobartim

You are so good in writing poetry.

I thought that this was beautiful.

Wonderful poem. Wish I called read your poem all day over and over. Masterpiece. I love the image too

great choice keep it up

Meditation
Power
Desire.
And
Passion
Are the pivotal theme here...
I think..

good work